I'm having second thoughts about using sloppy inkbrush letters for the headlines. I thought it would bring the "anarchic" personality of Do that Remi mentioned, but I think it looks too Vampire.

Stayed a little late and got up a little early, but I managed to bang out a revision to the layout and it's looking pretty cool to my weary eyes.

Working in more of the postal/passport imagery, inspired by Tazo Tea packaging.

Along the top, you can see the "progress meter" gimmick I used when I layed out Reign. It keeps track of how long a section is and how far along you are in it. If you know about it, it's useful, but subtle enough to just be a dingbat.

I tried making individual layers of the drawing blue, but decided that this sort of iridescent sheen had an interesting Final Fantasy vibe. What do you think?